All Comments on 'The Neighbors Ch. 01'

by bhuff

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muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Needs a better ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Bhuff, I never considered how TWA originated until now. Interesting prequel so far. Points for originality and content. And my gratitude for the entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story started nicely up to the blowjob with Becca. I really hope you would consider including a bit of a romance part between Barbara and Ben or Ben and some of the co-eds. Otherwise, it will be a bang-bang story...

DrityGrandpaDrityGrandpaover 1 year ago

Confused , Was it Buffy or Bobbi that Ben took on his business trip. One sentence it's Bobbi and then another sentence it's Buffy . Comon Man !!!

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