All Comments on 'The Nest is Empty!'

Excellent! Just the sort of swinging I fantasize about!

The bi thing is a bit of a squick for me but your writing was so hot you get 5 stars. Really a hot story, the way it would have been improved for me is a bit more of a voyeuristic description of the sex with more emphasis on her orgasm but that's more my own thing.

Very well written, and of course, now we want the next chapter.

Please learn how to use "lay", "lie", "laid" correctly. You get it wrong everytime.

And how did Don run a red light when he was in a car with his wife who was driving?

A bit of a turnoff with everyone dying in car crashes ...it was as if you were in a hurry to set up the current relationship...but very hot otherwise.

Very hot! And, something I have always wanted to experience with my wife... sure, us wih another female, but also us with another male! And, us with another couple, ALL of us being bisexual, so we ALL enjoy each other in every way way humanly possible.