All Comments on 'The New Slave Ch. 01'

Nice start..keep writing please

I like it keep going. (:

Must agree good start can't wait to find out who sir really is

Good start! Really interested to see who the Master is and what's going to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter!

IDK what to think.

Wow! This is awesome, just the sort of story I enjoy. I'd love to read more about Daniel and his Master. I'm hoping you'll continue this story and I eagerly await an update.

that this story is amazing.

I am definitely adding this to my favs.

:)

Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us.

This is so erotic!

Just thought I'd let you know that it's a "prostate", not a "prostrate".

Very erotic, enticing too!

The dialog belongs in a very bad porno, it just isnt believable. It´s very rushed, low on detail and the characters are not even halfway developed.

Well I very much enjoyed the story and you paced it very well not to fast not to long. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

The boy says self he is being rape. That is not okay to write about that.

Thanks.

I loved this whole story.Jerked of while I wished I could experience everything that happened.Being exposed wide open and used is a long time fantasy of mine.Love the bondage and punishment involved in the whole scenario.Keep writing.

sub, except i'd wanna wake up in the swing withat big cock up my ass.

always a long term wish while i was stationed in Norfolk , to be used

This is a good story. It belongs in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category. Other than that, it's pretty hot. Hope you give Ch.02 a go in the future.

Straight readers get pissed off when MM stories end up in the other categories, and start to rant. Apparently, all gay sex can be shoehorned into this category, but straight readers get 20 for themselves. Still, it’s better than authors having to deal with the homophobic crap they are subjected to in reader comments.

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Awesome start to the story. Can't wait to read the rest.

I would have loved being in that story and being the boy cunt slave