All Comments on 'The New Waitress'

More about Robin! Please, please, please!

I have to take a cold shower, Whew!

I like the story alot I would also like details on the makeup sex.

I'm sold. I just happened on this story at random and it is fantastic!

MORE WE DEMAND MORE OF ROBIN... excellent story and well written

I wonder how many guys wish this was more than a fantasy for them... thanks for sharing your wonderful art in words...

This tale is simply great, amazing.. in one word..

HOT.

Thanx.

A second chapter would be really nice to read as this one was a easy read and a blast to read.

More adventures of Robin pleeeeez... Loved it. Wonder how I missed this from the start.

Excellent writing, not too trashy!

Great Stuff!

The surprising twist at the end really got me. Nice touch!

writter. I mean jesus lok at the freek's photo on his page. The gene pool is sooooooooo fucked up!

Really enjoyed the story. Great storyline and erotic detail. Nice twist at the end. Would be very interested to know where it will lead to. Whats happened to the trucker with his 10 inches. By the way you are definitely kinky and worth a serious stab and a suck.

i would love to read a part 2 your a very goog writer who makes people want to read more please make a part 2 soon

Get a life, this is all about fantasy. Keep the criticism positive.

A well written submission - keep up the great work.

great hot sex, interesting to see where Robin takes any transition-if s/he does-thanks

Definitely liked better than Career Shift, the first one of yours I've read (which was pretty darn good, but not quite right for me).

The girlfriend part of this story was a complication I don't care for.

In real life, I may never want to give up that one little part of me and still want the company of the fairer sex.

But understand that in my fantasies, I get to live as a woman and only date/do men.

The other thing that's tough for me to swallow are guys in a story who have never had the inkling that they would like this (Being a girl and sucking/fucking men), just all of a sudden go for it...

Otherwise, this was hot and made me jealous!!

WOW WISH I HAD A G F LIKE THAT !!!

Wish there was more to this story!

Loved it, what a lucky gurl. Any openings?