All Comments on 'The Next Doll Pt. 01'

I hope you continue with this. I’m anxious to see where it goes. So far I really like the direction. Can’t wait for the next installment.

A good beginning! I can't wait to read the further adventures of Meaghan and David.

Was hoping the updated doll was going to be trans female

Hope the call me mistress, yes daddy and brain dead bimbo are a little bit of foreshadowing. I look forward to more.

This is a good opening. I love the concept, it has a lot of potential, and could go in so many different directions and so many potential plot twists. I'm looking forward to part two.

Have me thinking what is going to happen next when David gets out of the box??