All Comments on 'The Night I Discovered a Woman'

It's quite amazing how you managed to fit a whole story, feelings, emotional progression and the rest in such a short piece without making it rushed or losing anything. Marvellous job.

Yes, I agree that this piece crammed a lot of eros into a short timeframe. We feel we know her, our hesitant newbie-lez. Beautifully rich and finely crafted work, ms L&L.

The story was beautifully written with believable motivation. I hope that you write more because I can see that she could end up being Jennifer's full-time lover . . . and I mean LOVER not just sex partner.

I really enjoy reading female characters written by women. Try as one might, it's less authentic if the author isn't of the same gender of the character. For example, how would you describe how an erection feels?

IMO this could be a nice series for you to explore,