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Daniellaxmjts about 5 years ago

It has potential

Editing is very much needed, quite a few grammatical errors. Storyline is good however the descriptions are over embellished and actually take away from what could be a wonderful erotic ride. Keep writing, I see the potential of a good writer in here.

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There is something magical about letting go and giving yourself to someone. A little exhibitionism, a little teasing, some punishment and the uninhibited rapture released during bondage and BDSM is something wild, untamed and beautiful. All of the stories are available for sa...

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