All Comments on 'The Nightingale Agency Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Not very erotic yet building up nicely

jleniljlenilabout 8 years ago
Nice start

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
And she never heard from him again

Why would he EVER go back or talk to her? She holds nothing over him but her imagination. He would have gone home, had a quick drink, taken a shower, laughed at himself and then gone to bed, forgetting her completely. Idiotic story.

1 star.

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