by Redbirdfree
...But you write a heavy story, and beautifully romantic. Well done, and thank you for sharing such a moving tale. Hope there will be more from you soon! Cheers! --- Josie
well written...xclnt read.....do write more...loved it that she was hung n could perform ...;p
I really enjoyed this. It was well written, good characters, nice build up to the sex....and the sex was damn hot lol. I too liked that she was hung and capable of performing. Definitely looking forward to another chapter.
Whiskey
Ditto what Whiskey said--great story, hot sex, and a hung tranny who can give and take a pounding, everything a great story needs! I hope we'll get more of our lovers in the future. She needs to pound that ass!
The emotional moments where good and the sex was very good.
I would love to see more from you.
i'm not rating you since i couldn't read the story, but the formatting made it unreadable for me.
Break spoken word up to one paragraph per person. Then start a new paragraph for the next person, and so on and so forth.
Read a book and see how it's done. Walls of text don't work.
I normally don't like prison stories, or versatile shemales (I prefer them to be all top!) but this was so well done I couldn't help but love it! I look forward to more stories from this talented newcomer.
Read it all the way through and liked it, but I can't help but feel it could have been a little better. It feels like you rushed into the sex a little quickly, like you should have built up to it more.
I'd love to see a followup, maybe what happens to them after they get of prison?
intelligent real and insightful... not words you typically see for sex story reviews... but exactly true to this one. overall great work that stimulate more parts of the body
i love to suck cock but i cant get any cum when i do can someone give me tips