All Comments on 'The Not So Friendly Gym'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Forced

I just love stories of forced, dominate sex. As long as noone is permanately injured. A loose slightly bleeding asshole is okay. Where can I find more stories like this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
My Kind of Gym

Fucking hot!!! How come he never went back? Looks like he enjoyed it a bit. LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it

I just had to let you know how much I loved your story. I wish there were more like this. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Almost perfect!

Great story, and I lvoe the plot! I would have liked it just a little more if "Bill" had maybe enojyed it and went back for more. Just a thought...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Meh

You changed from past tense to present tense in the middle of the story and that sort of ruined it for me, it was a very abrupt change and not at all necessary. Truly hindered the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
great story

I enjoyed it. The temtation and mistery and getting it done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Is it hard?

I ask you, is it really so hard to understand the concept of Non-Consent/Reluctance? The story itself is a fairly-good rape scene, it's just in the wrong category.

Oh, sure, all the characters are male, but come on.

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