All Comments on 'The Novice Ch. 03'

I've waited so long for this submission. I checked for it everyday since your update. Thank you so much for the ending. Please give us more! I want to know SOOOOOO badly what happens with Lukas! You had me cheering at the end!

Fantastic as always! Please don't let her be intimate with Louis again - you broke my heart with the last chapter :( Leave her with Lukas - he's much nicer :)

What an amazing story the building up of the emotions and the last minute appearance of Lucas I loved every minute and will be anticipating the continuation of the story

Another great chapter and I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

You never disappoint with your work or your words and always manage to leave me wanting more and more. Fantastic submission, I just wish you could spend all your time writing so I'd have more to read. A very awed fan.

wonderfully written, as usual. can't wait to see what happens between her and lukas! at some point it would be great for the truth to come out. lukas kick some butts, maybe? she's a fantastic character because she's so innocent, but hopefully as the stories progressed she'll realize how twisted Father Matthew is. overall, FANTASTIC!!

I've waited a year for this chapter! I hope we don't have to wait that long for the next one! Very well written! I love how Lukas took her away..Can't wait till the next one!

I always love your work!

It's such a torure having to wait for your new chapters! I love all of your stories!

Like everyone I've been waiting for the next part in this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Don't leave us hanging for so long! I really enjoyed this story, not just for the eroticism but also for the setting and characterization. I can't stand to wait another year for one more chapter. Keep writing, or you might find your fans rioting!

You have an amazing talent with words. The emotions of the characters ripped right through me. Fantastic. Please write more!!

Ah, you've finally posted another nice chapter. About time Lukas showed up! Was beginning to worry if Audrey was going to fall more and more to the whims of her duties or was Lukas going to come (literally) and save her? Continue to mesmerize us!

i started The Novice about a month ago and have been anxiously awaiting chapter 3. i can't imagine waiting a year! i enjoy your work very much. please post another chapter soon!

Your writing is exquisite...I have enjoyed this story and anxiously await the next chapter....soon please?

I was waiting for more in this series, and you certainly don't disappoint! I can't wait to hear more about what Lukas has in store for her! Keep writing, it's great! :)

I have been waiting months and months and months for the next chapter to this amazing story! Please please keep writing! I can't wai tto hear more about Lukas and Audrey, I'd have wished that Louis hadn't taken her virginity, I was hoping it would be Lukas but thats okay it's still unbelievable sexy and interesting.

You got my favorite tall dark and handsome profile, one of my favorite most sexy names, pleeeease continue! Your stories give me the small reprieves from life necasary to keep my sanity.

this is seriously good stuff! I really hope you can write the next chapter soon, cos I can't wait. Kudos wishfulthinking

How long do I have to wait for more?!?!?

This thread does me no good and lots of good all at the same time - and like everything naughty, I cant get enough!

Love the content and the writing - please give me another taste soon?

amore! amore!!

*Please* don't wait another year to write the next chapter.

I can't wait for Audrey and Lukas to get together. Please give us a new chapter.

Great idea and story. This episode was just a little drawn out coompared to the others, and the descriptions a little unclear as to what was going on. But you are stll one of the best writers in literotica. Keep it up!

next chapter?

please write more!

This story is one of my favourites, I check regularily for the next installment, please, let it be soon!

I've been waiting anxiously for you to continue this story. Religiously checking literotica but to no avail. You're a fantastic writer. Love your characters and the sex scenes are hot hot hot!! Please put me out of my misery!!!!!! Thank you!

Please please please finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're the best writer ever on this site.

I loved the way you match religion and sex like that. I wish you will continue this very soon. However, I feel a little disappointed that it is the Father who claimed Audrey's maidenhood and not Lukas. Nevertheless, everything can't be perfect even in a fiction-world, eh? Keep writing and keep up the good work!

I have enjoyed the story of the Novice greatly and egarly await the next instalment. I only hope I can learn from your writing skills to make my future stories half as good. I look forward to reading your other stories as well. I will keep an eye out for the next installment of this. Keep writing, you make reading worth the effort!

I have enjoyed the story of the Novice greatly and egarly await the next instalment. I only hope I can learn from your writing skills to make my future stories half as good. I look forward to reading your other stories as well. I will keep an eye out for the next installment of this. Keep writing, you make reading worth the effort!

I really have half a mind to finish it, but i know i can't possibly do as good a job as you. Your writing is fantastic, it's so engaging, not at all gratuitous like so many other stories that i'm "forced" to read, given a shortage of yours. For god's sake please write something else, a book--i'll pay, anything! I even made my boyfriend read this for tips, and I never let him see the stories i read, that is, with the exception of yours. I know this sounds silly, but really people depend on your writing abilities. Not to mention, don't your charecters keep calling to you to finish their story! Please, give us something, anything else!

Are you going to expand this story? I has been good to this point, but the last chapter seemed incomplete. I hope you will continue your work _aW

Literotica is new to me so this comment is a year overdue. Why don't you finish your stories? It is unfair to your readers. I spent a lot of time reading Conquered: Spoils of War as well as The Novice, only to be left hanging. It was a very good story so why didn't you finish it? I will be very reluctant to read anything from you in the future.

I have really enjoyed this stroy since the first chapter appeared, I appreciate it takes a lot of work to polish the next chapter, but, please don't leave us hanging as long for the next installment as we did for this one!

I Love this story... don't stop!

........ don't you finish this? I'm going to make up my own ending in my head tonight because I am so angry with you. Then hopefully, you will finish it and make my ending look like crap compared to yours.

devoted but frustrated,

molly

You really need to finish this story! It can't end like that!

Finish this story! The writing is wonderful, the story is fantastic, and I\\\'m rather attached to Audrey!

that's it!? This could have been great. It wasn't. Very anticlimactic.

I have great hope that you'll continue with this mesmerizing story. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Audrey and Lukas deepens (a sucker for romance). I know you take a while between chapters, so I'll hang on with patience in the meantime. Keep up the wonderful work. Thanks!

NOOO!!! you have got to finish this. this story holds too much potential. please finish it...

MORE PLEASE!

please finish this it is a wonderful story...especially the bits between Lukas and Audrey.

..as I dreamed the chapter and was left hard and aroused. Your writing is very good, though felt that this third chapter needed to be longer. The punishment by the mother superior could have amounted to more and the Lucas character be given more time to be the voyeur at the pool. Wonderful, cock-stirring writing.

Spectatcular story defintly the best I've ever read at this site. I really hope you continue with the story soon.

i always loved the way you wrote stories, so please, please continue this series! you cant left it like that! there's still more to come!!

i would love to know more lol this story is very good so please keep writing

Can you please work on the next chapter? =)

So glad Lukas steals her away. Of course it's all hot, but the hopeless romantic in me really needed Lukas to save her :)

Very good story with enough intrigue and tension to make me curious about what's to come. I do hope you're planning another chapter and if so, that it will post soon. Lovely.

I love all of your stories!!! please finish!!!

I'm so sad she's not a virgin anymore. She should have been one for Lukas. I feel like she's not pure anymore, as though not worthy of Lukas. Why did Louis have to rape her? Ugh. I love most of your stories, but this one is ruined.

i want audreys happiness,i hope lucas is the man to worship her.

This is fantastic!!

why he gets stronger and she gets weaker--does it have to be like this?

Why her pleasure is in submission--

slaves love being conquered?

No, I love it too

But I'm not a slave by a long shot

if I'm going to be weak I'd rather it not be to a male--my historical enemy willing to let women die.

That's why there are screw-ball comedies.

which is why screwball comedies were created--isn't it?

Anyway, they work!

(Carole Lombard, especially in "To Be Or Not To Be")

Maybe it's unsure who "wins" in screwball comedies--Do women have more power in these movies? I haven't thought of this before, but I bet there are tomes claiming this.

Then the irony of sort of airhead heroines having more power than in many other kinds of comedy. But they're only pretend airheads.

As Bukowski said, "It's all horse shit anyway." All of it. Everything.

basically saved my life.

I wouldn't even want to enjoy anything. To laugh. I'd be so depressed (my husband says, "You don't get depressed. You get vicious!"). I'd feel like I was degrading myself to laugh and have fun. That I was perpetuating what was wrong. Why I was born inferior because I'm female. (I know this sounds dramatic, but I'm not kidding. I'm not playing around. My family was very unusual, to say the least. If I'd been a young American black girl/woman, other things might have been much worse, but I don't believe I'd have felt so inferior just for being female. I think there would have been maternal women in my life--to guide me even a little. And no I wouldn't have wanted to obey them either. But I would have seen them. I would have know they were there. That they existed. That they weren't--invisible.

[That they weren't locked up in the state insane asylum. My father could come and go as he wanted to--except for all the asylum rules about visitation. But MY mother couldn't go anywhere. Everything she did was watched. She was a prisioner. And drugged.])

Anyway, good comedy could always make me smile, laugh, no matter my political ideas--these could actually be overthrown. "But there's sexism in this movie!" But I was overthrown. Conquered. (If Lombard or Hepburn--see "Bringing Up Baby" made me laugh even in a movie with sexism, then it was ok.)

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As Hazel Flagg in one of her personal favorites, Nothing Sacred (1937)Lombard made her film debut at the age of twelve AFTER SHE WAS SEEN PLAYING BASEBALL in the street by director Allan Dwan; HE CAST HER AS A TOMBOY IN "A PERFECT CRIME" (1921). In the 1920s, she worked in several low-budget productions credited as Jane Peters, and later as Carol Lombard.

from Wikipedia

no man's ever desired me enough to try to penetrate me--

i state this fact about myself proudly--

this fact should show that I'm an undesirable female (I'm not a woman)--

yet i am not only proud--

but arrogrant!

My husband thanks you!

FINALLY I am hoping she is going to be with the man she SHOULD be with, just my opinion of course lol! Not that Ftr Matthew isn't fun and all but he's taking too long with the playing games!! :D OH! And Mother? ... Niiiiice lol! ;)