by My Erotic Trail
Art, you are really something else. The image of a naked and enraged Stormy spraying bullets made me almost choke on my water! Good luck in the contest.
Art, your ability to come up with a surprising tale never ceases to amaze. My only real concern was setting this one in Iraq, I know it's 'make believe' but really, naked women on the streets of Iraq! Good luck.
what a quixotic and clever story! Your fertile imagaination delights as always!
So georgeously not politically correct. Loved it. Good luck.
Anyone who can come up with a humor piece based in Basra, deserves kind public comments and high votes. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
MET!! I enjoyed reading your story, and the depiction of the work environment was great. we call the temp-lift here a "buck hoist", helluva way to get around, huh, rickety things!!
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maria
This was a riot! Quite a wild ride... whew! "I want to shoot your gun" *grin* uh-huh... Great job, loved it, good luck in the contest. :)
The clash between cultures is in full swing at a building site in Iraq. The boss's wife shows up and Nude day begins. A hilarious and outrageous Read. Very Enjoyable!