by jizzlober
You are by far one of the most eloquent writers I've had the pleasure of comming across. That being said, your sense -- or rather portrayal -- of one ought to consider the apex of female beauty and sexual attractiveness is highly questionable.
Anonymous (8/11/19) describes your writing very well. But ... This story just stops when it's getting good. Coitus interruptus! It was heading for a5 when it abruptly became a 3. Bad job.
have no idea what you're talking about, big words that I have no idea what the meaning is or understanding of them, it is great that you are well educated, but, write in words a normal person can read and understand. not all readers have your level of education. one star.