All Comments on 'The Obsession Ch. 03'

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Nitehawk2BearNitehawk2Bearover 14 years ago
Totally amazing

OMG!! You are by far one of the best writers of erotica I've ever read. Last week was the first time in reading your submissions and since then, I've read everything you've written. I love the intensity as you describe what is going on in the story; how you seem to "feel" everything and be able to put it into words. I look forward to each of your future stories. Take care. -Jim

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
The author has to bring out the over powering love

that they have for each other.Otherwise it is just fucking. Thanks for the great chapter, and I hope to see more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
AMAZING !!!!!!!!!

yes great work.. moreeeeeeee :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HOT

Love your work! Please continue with this story!

prop69prop69about 14 years ago
One of the Best

One of the best series. Erotic and yet not too crude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nicely done Sorian!!!

Please continue this adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Your stories have some nice elements

Your stories work, excite me, even the lesbian ones. The anticipation, the viewpoint of the characters, the building tension, the near romantic yet straightforward tone....very sexy! I'd like to read more and would love to send you some ideas or write a story with you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
CONTINUE

Yeah loving your stories, continue this one some more maybe with risk of getting caught (family reunion, Family Thanksgiving, Christmas, Halloween something.) and would love some new bro/sis stoies from you very good!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

i love the idea experience that with a family member it would be great.

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Great story. I would love to read more

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Well friends I love to write, collaborate and yes, of course, talk about and have sex. This has been a hobby of mine for some years, but in recent times (maybe because of the pandemic) more and more ideas have been coming to mind. I would love to hear from anyone that enjoys ...

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