All Comments on 'The Octopussy Necklace Ch. 02'

cmon

Moving way to slow. There was no new information in this chapter. What a let down!

and a longer read would be nice. This seemed to end far too soon. Interesting story so far, though. I enjoy it.

keep working at it - looks like it will pan out for you and the readers. 4*'s

She certainly is taking to this life quite easily. And she has been with no one other than her husband?

You are going nowhere fast. Hopefully we go somewhere soon. I'll continue reading.

Some STDs can be determined visually (eventually!) Some sexually transmitted problems (like crab lice) can be seen quickly! But many can NOT at all, and many not until they have been infectious for a good while! Some 'loser' MDs might just take money under false pretenses, but NONE would expose his or her OWN ass to an STD!

It is also unlikely that BadAss (organized crime) illegal businesses would accept the 'background check' in place, especially after having been infiltrated within the previous few days!

Still hoping the action will pick up soon!

If she wantto find her man she should go to a hotel sptnd time looking around town.

I guess her vows don't mean any thing to her.

If I were in her husbands shoes and I found out what she was doing it would be worse than death.....and even if she single handedly saved me from certain death...

I would never take her back!...I don't like where this story is going...a 2 so far.

Sorry, I find your story disguesting.