by manyeyedhydra
Just wish the slimeballs...well the despicable rich bastards before they literally became slimeballs, suffered more for being so heinous instead of meeting their demise in such a seemingly pleasurable way more or less. Nice story.
This is pretty awesome. I do love a twist on an old classic. Nicely done.
Although it's not my favorite of your stories, you certainly tapped into the times and the theme of the contest well.
Dude if anybody hates on you for writing amazing stories like this, PLEASE ignore them. I really enjoy your work and those prudes are a disgrace. Great story!
Yes the Master is BACK!!!!!! FINALLLLLY. Great story. Gubled it up.Have u seen our old pal Phill???? Please tell him that we miss him A LOTTT!!!
Thanks again.
Dmitry-USA
In every sense of the word. I really enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest!
so when are you gonna restart your best known series? the succubus summoning?
Unusual twist to your usual story style. It's different, but not all that bad
The title made me think of it instantly, the reference to Yuzna hit me even moreso, and suddenly it all turned into an awesome homage to Society! (great movie)
Fantastic, sexual, bizarre, and wonderfully executed. Great job! :)
That was as scary as shit! good writing, but even better premise! good luck- although i did like Phill more!
I found it fascinating how you took a classic like "Masque", added elements from "Videodrome" & a few other stories, and turned it into something original; you even dropped both the original author's name AND the name of the actor most associated with him. Great touch!
An even more disturbing homage to The Masque of the Red Death. And the main character's name is Edgar! Good stuff, lol.
I find myself rereading this one over and over more than any of your other stories. If you ever make another story like this…I’d be forever greatful 😂