All Comments on 'The Other Cock Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Everybody wins.

I like stories like that!

thebuffalothebuffaloabout 10 years ago

Very well done! Five stars for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

GREAT. REALLY LOVED THE EXHIBITIONIST STORY LINE. I'D LIKE TO SEE THE STORY DEVELOP INTO A FULL BLOWN THREESOME WITH SOME BI FUN AND PEGGING FUN TOO.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 10 years ago
More...

...and a big yes to the bi idea!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Fabulous story please write part 2

thestorynovicethestorynoviceabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

This is my first story. Thanks for the great comments and thank you to those who have read it. For now, I envision this as an ongoing storyline. I hope to have Chapter 2 done soon!

thestorynovicethestorynoviceabout 10 years agoAuthor
Next Chapter

I have submitted the second chapter, hopefully it will be up soon. I have decided the story will definitely be ongoing. For those who have requested bi or pegging, I have an outline of how the story will progress. It might take a few chapters, but I feel the characters heading that direction.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Lovely sweet story

It's nice because it was just a blow job, not sharing her pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow...!

A fantasy I bet lotsa guys have had! Reading it - seeing it -- getting hard and finally squirting from it! Hey -- you guys can do me any old time -- I won't complain!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
perfect!

Shauna sounds like my dream girlfriend!

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