All Comments on 'The Packages Ch. 07'

I've loved this series since the get go but the last chapter disappointed me. When the daughter said no she should have had that option. My number one rule of sex is nobody does anything the don't want to do. The girl was pushed into her situation. Lost a star for that but still favorite story due to the quality of the previous chapters. All in all not bad work. I thank you for your effort and will continue to read your submissions. All my best, max052

I dint liked this one at all. I liked AL the others but this one nope .

You could not have a worse end than that one why didn't you finish the story on chapter 6

I never leave reviews in the last idk how many years I’ve been on here and this was... I’m sorry rushed and disappointing! I’m heteroflexible learned that playing college football and I wasn actually looking forward to the dad and son scene but it was completely skipped over!

The first 4 were more love making and less perversion.

The last chapter was better than 5 and 6. Need more love and tenderness than just

FUCKING AND SODOMIZING.

Sorry but the daughter said no she should have been aloud to leave I bong agree with forcing she was raped

What is with all the writers of your ilk? Why do you feel it necessary to ruin an otherwise adequate story by closing with all that pregnancy junk? And as to the ass fucking; gimme a break . . . .