All Comments on 'The Park'

All I get camping is eaten alive by black flies... this guy is swallowed whole by a redhead! Where's the justice?

Of all of my camping, hiking, and rock climbing experiences this is the epitome story of all time! This is perhaps one of the HOTTEST pieces out there! Excellent work, I just have one question that more may be asking: Is there more coming? This one ends like there could be more to this one and if so, I hope it is just as hot as this one is!

I want a map of this place. Really need to go camping there. Damn Tx, do you write anything that isn't hot?

there could be a continueous could there?

as usual :) Lynn

stories worth reading getting few and far between.

thanks for this one

I really enjoyed it. It seems Paula and Randy have found something Each Other.

This story should have a sequil and bring us up to date. I think there is a wedding in the future but you have to write the story. 5stars plus. Love or lust I vote for love.

Ron. Texas

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Sooo much more adventure in this story yet

Funny at times, sexual and 2 people falling in love. Happy ending what more could you ask for BUT what happens with them next?

Ron/cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

A great story. I loved it, and wish there was a sequel.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

You have the talent to honor this with a sequel. I would not be alone in applauding,should you choose to do so. Five and Faved.

Gave it a five. Two problems however. Too and to!

This is a great romance story. I just have one issue. It is way too short. LOL. Please add more chapters. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

Wonderful story. Thank you very much.