All Comments on 'The Perfect Orgasm'

by MountainDewMan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Perfectly executed

Maybe just explaining to sister that there’s more than “OK enough for a married couple” won’t be adequate?

biggibbybiggibbyover 4 years ago
Wow!

Good Lord that was hot. Well done.

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 4 years ago
I was right!

I am so glad.

philteephilteeover 4 years ago

God I wish I could do that. Outstanding story. Thanks.

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 4 years ago
please

continue and add his aunt as well

Tony StrokesTony Strokesabout 4 years ago

Please continue, and maybe add the Aunt in as well, as I think she deserves a little dicking as well for setting them up. Maybe even a confirmed pregnancy from the Mom down the road. Great job with this story though.

racfguyracfguyalmost 4 years ago

Yeah, right. A mother doesn't recognize her son's voice? An eighteen year old boy knows how to really 'make love' to a middle-aged woman? All an eighteen year old wants to do is blow his load. Nice try MDM. Should be in some 'fantasy' category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story...

Good sensitivity and romance, but really don't think an 18 year old could deliver that.

Not even with a wealth of experience under his belt/in his pants.

At 18 years old, I'd already had three years fantastic tuition from my mothers friend, (without her knowledge), 16 years my senior.... A fabulous teacher in all respects.

If the son was 30 years old, I could buy it.

Well written otherwise.

You had me "hooked" in no time, even though I knew the ending.😊😊🙏🙏🙏😊😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

Really like this one. People talking about the kid couldn’t do that. Sometimes the connection allows people to get to next level. Don’t forget her sister talked to him. She may have done some training. They had few days to a week.

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

(8/31/2021) Again, nicely done. Nicely done indeed. A few miss letters in some words, but who cares. This was a nice read. 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

We knew it was eric from the start. The only criticism was when he switched the light on surly she would have reacted differenty even if the outcome would have been the same. Still 5 stars

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

Waaaayyyy ttooooooooo sssllllooooooowwww.

finegoldwinefinegoldwineover 2 years ago

5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 That was 🔥 ♨️ HOT

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

So hot! Knock up Mom and then the Aunt in the next chapter? So well written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another great and well told story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Brilliant and HOT!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Worshipping a mindless slut? No, thanks.

ToughSailorToughSailor2 months ago

Beautiful segue. You're one of the few writers that didn't devolve into the use of the juvenile form of 'mommy' lieu of the adult 'mom'. Nor did you feel the need to placate the 'pregnancy' fetish crowd . . . .

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