All Comments on 'The Perfect Pieces Ch. 07'

From a master of romance.

"I stopped falling last night," Amber stated as she picked up her bag, "let me know when you catch up."

That's awesome, made me grin...

Man, this is a great story.

Your story just gets better and better. You are a master of dialogue. Like SMC, I was really taken by Amber's "I've already fallen" line. Masterful! I know that there will be some nail biting scenes to come, but I am happily awaiting more chapters. Thank you!

but I suspect it will be a turbulent spring.

but there are some dark clouds on the horizon. He may believe that he is invulnerable, but-------

have a way with words. I'll bet he will prevail but end up in a hospital.

..... and ingenious dialogue between these two absorbing characters. Coming to this story so late gives me the advantage of quickly moving to the next chapter -- which I am doing now.

Time for break from all the loving to go get the bad guys and bring Lizzy home.

HHhmmmm. This gets interesting and interestinger.

Great break location...thanks.