All Comments on 'The Perfect Pieces Ch. 12'

As are all of your stories.

This one was special because of the character development and plot twists.

Thank you for continuing to write and of course post for free for the Literotica community.

C

But then... I'm such a romantic sucker for a nice ending...

thank you DC.

A fan,

LeFrog

And just wonderful. Thank you.

My only complaint about this wonderful story is that there is only one more chapter. It's bittersweet looking forward to the next chapter while knowing that it will soon be over.

good twist with the bust

Been a really good read...I guess the end is next...too bad!

DC--This story just gets better and better. I am enjoying it immensely, and look forward to,the final chapter. Then, I am looking forward to going into your library and reading all of your work here. (I've already read "The Gift"--amazing, poignant, and heartbreaking, all at once!). Thank you for sharing your talents with your fans, and for creating such vivid characters!

I love this story. Thanks, DC. Glad your friend convinced you to post it.

There are only a few pages left in this book.... I hope that you don' t twist in again and hang him over a cliff at the end of the story!

The jigsaw is (almost) complete.

loved the last words of this chapter

I love your one liners. " I looked at the Kool-aid drinker and felt only pity." Priceless, almost as good as "LED pirates". I guess it's true, some of the best things in life are free. Well, if you don't count the cost for the internet service or the device used to access it. Thank you, very well done. I was a little curious though, how did Lizzy go from six to ten in one year? Other than that little hiccup and a few typos it's great entertainment.

is the most important character in this story. I just realized that as I was reading this chapter.

..... with enjoyment of this story, but regretting going into the last chapter.

A very intriguing story about life and love!! Very well written and edited!!

I know something about glass work and your story seems to be right on the way it's written!

We all wish it could continue in another story!! :=)

the Mentor

This is multiple reconciliation at all costs, and he played his last card for it. Sad, when she's cheating or runs off in 5 years...due to unresolved psychological issues and being a pathological liar and manipulator at all costs, even bringing her kid to get what she wants from him. She disappears and reappears so many times, any sane person would have said enough long ago. It would have been a good ending right after she gets picked up by the DEA, he raises her daughter, finds a better romance target.

Annonomousinblue said it all.

Correctly.

BOOM !!!!

Getting better, thznks.