All Comments on 'College Days Ch. 01'

albeit backwards lol

I do like your style and now I think, after reading this one, I'll read them in the right order. :)

Your writing style is refreshingly different. Not that I'm complaining. I'm just curious. It has the tinge of a non-english speaker. I won't comment on grammar because it's definitely unique in its own right. Anyhow, I'll point out a few things that stuck out while reading your story:

> Numbers, unless they're a huge numeral like 1547, should be written in words. This is a general rule of thumb for people writing fiction. It's not a point that I'd like to beat you on, just something you should keep in mind.

> I don't know where you set your story, but professors smoking joints with students in their apartments sounds a bit too far-fetched. I'm kinda glad that you didn't try to stuff in a hasty explanation. You don't tell and readers don't ask.

I guess it worked fine enough.

> The protagonist gives his teacher an amazing licking down there and he enters her...through the backdoor? Anal? I'm not against anal but it felt weird, I guess. Most authors usually would include a normal sex before hopping into the anal bandwagon.

I just hopped a guess that you meant doggy-style sex when you said backdoor.

> I dig the way you describe things. It's exotic, and I like that. It reminds me of another author who used to write here. There's a psychedelic touch to it and I think it matches perfectly with marijuana-fuelled sex. Good one.

I liked reading this one. If I had one word for it, it'd be 'unique'. It was a, all in all, a good read. Keep writing.

Bard