All Comments on 'The Perfect Roommate'

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510mike510mikeabout 2 years ago

Great start to what can be a very enjoyable series! Edging has always been something I've enjoyed and extended edging is even better!

Reggie2xxReggie2xxabout 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story I’ve edged myself several times and it seem to strengthen my orgasm in the end. I would like to read a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I don't like edging and cock cages. It was ok story, but I need more normal/passionate sex vibe, however I praise you for introducing some elements of emotional buildup.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow, that was amazing!! Please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story is my first from you. Good premise. Liked the slow build and the quick let down. Obviously, you edged yourself while writing the story; your deflected concentration caused imperfect grammar and spelling errors. stay in the chosen tense throughout the paragraph, or at least the sentence. Of course, your story edges the reader. Have fun writing, and your readers will enjoy edging with you.

Thanks.

curiouspj1962curiouspj1962about 2 years ago

Fantastic start. Please continue this story. Edging can be a very fun torture

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue.

Reader777Reader777about 2 years ago

Very hot and exciting and real. I was squirming in my chair while reading it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I was rubbing my head, edging myself to your story. Very hot. Love to Read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue. This was really good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue with this story, WOW! Can't wait to hear what happens next!!!

curioustimcurioustimalmost 2 years ago

so hot..... I can imagine being both of them...depending on my mood....

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