by we_all_kneel
Great start to what can be a very enjoyable series! Edging has always been something I've enjoyed and extended edging is even better!
I enjoyed this story I’ve edged myself several times and it seem to strengthen my orgasm in the end. I would like to read a second chapter.
I don't like edging and cock cages. It was ok story, but I need more normal/passionate sex vibe, however I praise you for introducing some elements of emotional buildup.
This story is my first from you. Good premise. Liked the slow build and the quick let down. Obviously, you edged yourself while writing the story; your deflected concentration caused imperfect grammar and spelling errors. stay in the chosen tense throughout the paragraph, or at least the sentence. Of course, your story edges the reader. Have fun writing, and your readers will enjoy edging with you.
Thanks.
Fantastic start. Please continue this story. Edging can be a very fun torture
Very hot and exciting and real. I was squirming in my chair while reading it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I was rubbing my head, edging myself to your story. Very hot. Love to Read more.
Please continue with this story, WOW! Can't wait to hear what happens next!!!