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by m_storyman_x

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tentaclesforalltentaclesforallover 7 years ago
Another in a long line of solid and well told stories

Keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"...pools of light around the perimeter of the pool, the bulk of the pace still practically dark. "

'pace'??

;>)

neosamneosamover 7 years ago
fantastic

Fantastic narration

keep writing . The sex scene should be more in details

thanks for sharing

neo

bigdnc13bigdnc13over 7 years ago
Wonderful Story!!

Love to see another chapter with these two.

pip1247pip1247about 7 years ago
Wonderful

Great story with a consistent plot. I've become a big fan of your writing and really enjoy your short stories just as much as your longer more complicated stories. Keep up the good work.

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 6 years ago
More please?

Well written, believable and empathetic characters; could easily go another chapter or two...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More,

more!!

Needs at LEAST another Chapter!!

j

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very nice story, first class, keep it up! Waiting for more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

WHERE is the rest of this story??

j

rbloch66rbloch666 months ago

A guy cheating on his wife isn’t romantic. It’s super trashy. Guys like him make it difficult for the rest of us.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Oh, I do wish there was a Part 2!

j

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I love the outdoors, fishing, hunting , boating, photography, writing and of course SEX ! I have a fertile mind of ideas and have written many of them in my stories here. After 40+ years of marriage and raising a family I'm ready to live some of those fantasies, even though...