All Comments on 'The Photo Shoot'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Jennifer, you are one hot lady.

My God Jenn, you had me hard from start to finish. The most incredibly exciting story I've read in quiet a while. When I noticed the story was 4 pages long, I thought it wouldn't hold me to the end, but I was so very wrong. Wow!, my heart is still racing as I type this message to you.

Than you Jenn, keep them cumming.

melsdad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
You are the greatist Jen

I love your stories, they get me so hot!!! Such a sexy girl with her legs open. One day I hope to do some of the things you relate here !!

Molly

lancewannabelancewannabeabout 18 years ago
Love the slut stories

Jenn,

Your stories are SO erotic, and full of sex and sluttiness. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hottest Story

Was one of the hottest stories I've ever read! Loved it.

starman2718starman2718over 17 years ago
Hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jen,

A really hot story! The buildup of the first 2-1/2 pages was incredible. I look forward to reading more like this from you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
awesome

puts me on fire

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
wow

very erotic....that had me hard from start to finish.

i could only ever dream of having that happen to my wife while i watched.enjoyed it thanks

SamFrenchSamFrenchover 16 years ago
The most amazing part is...

you. Your stories match your pics and knowing you get off on showing your sexy body makes it all the sexier. I can't get enough of your stories.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 15 years ago
Wow!

Hotter than 10-chilli sauce, man!

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 14 years ago
Awesome!!

One steamy story!! The sexy dialogue alone made it worth the read. Jenn,you are the greatest.

b1053mutantb1053mutantabout 13 years ago
what a tease..

Jenn, another great build, even slower than the last story of yours that I read, 'The River'. I knew what was coming, of course, but you held it off and held it off, and the way things developed seemed inevitable in the end, but no less exciting because of it.

One thing that adds to your stories for me is the thought that all or part of it might be true, as you've written that your work is based (loosely?) on your sex life. You're scorching hot in the picture on your bio, and, although it feels like cheating (in visualizing the story), it's you I imagine in all of your stories. But then you'd like that, wouldn't you?

Thanks for putting these little gems of seduction out there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Story

Jennifre01

Your #1 with me!

I like your style.

I also am a photographer, and though my wife used to pose for me, we never really went all the way on our fantasy.

we did however have another female join us at my wife's request.

really like how you went all the way.

you have lovely nipples, that is a turn on that never fails to get it going.

can't wait to read your other stories.

a new fan.

nyc/guy

nakadashinakadashiover 12 years ago
can't get better than this!

Jenn, this is another really great story, the climax builds until it bursts on you at the end. whooo!! Read while looking at your pics and whoo what a climate for me. thanks, John

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wow

that is all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story, but...

You need to get someone to edit your work. Typical typos and punctuation problems, but the worst was on Page 3 when Mark all of a sudden is renamed John.

nadinephillipsnadinephillipsalmost 11 years ago
Can't wiat for Chapter two.......

I loved it and would love to see chapter 2 through 20, lots to work with here including the female student or for that matter the photography class. Jennifer is a slut after my heart and I love it. Hug to Jennifer!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
to be in the same situation(awesome)

loved the story and wish my g/f would let me try this with her,to have her tied up and able to do what we want with her as well as her wanting it just as much is awesome,specially the instructor and having it all on film to show everybody

tony1stony1sover 10 years ago
wish i was part of this

WOW would love to get my g/f in a similar situation where she knew we was filming her and I was going to show everybody specially where the instructor was screwing her plus losing the blindfold was well good and I know it would of made her orgasm better

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Photo Shoot

One of th best and erotic stories I have read in a long long time.I wished it was me the whole time I was reading.

griz375griz375over 10 years ago
Promised you I would read more of your pieces

I'm up to 8 w/ this one and none have failed to excite or titillate

REALLY good stuff - Ghia is likely always going to be my favourite but this would be a close second - lets see how they all rank in a week or so when I've read all your work

THX for writing and sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Thank You for the clues

Boys rarely understand girls. You share your point of view of embracing your sexuality. I believe that most girls are afraid to do what you have done. Thank you for sharing your thought process. Also - you're just plain fun.

col_lovercol_loverover 3 years ago
That was fucking HOT 10 Stars

I love a good slut story, and this one nailed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Hot! LOVE it! ★★★★★ (5.0).

Helen1899Helen1899over 2 years ago

That's the hottest story I have ever read. God u have shot to the top of my favourite authors.100_stars wouldn't be to many

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The ending, while entertaining, sucks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was Fucking Epic !!

Great story even better writing....congrats on a great one..

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

liked the story,,you need an editor to get the names right,,,amateurish ending

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11/7 I'm an artist and today's my birthday, I specialize in portraits, but am doing more Trompe L'Oeil painting nowadays. I'm petite, only 5' tall and weigh (this morning anyway) 101 lbs. I travel alot. While I intended to spend most of the summer painting, I instead spent the...