All Comments on 'The Plan Pt. 01'

by DuncanMc

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

But just buildup for what will presumably happen in subsequent chapters.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

incomplete, but very stimulating

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Promising

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

You really are an excellent writer. I'd like to read more from you in some different categories. This chapter was very well done, and stops just in time to make me want to read more.

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