All Comments on 'The Pleasure Cruise Ch. 01'

I like the scenario and the work you've put into developing your characters. Very interested to read where you take this next. Five stars.

.... Is really well done. It really makes the story work. The scenes are really good too but the lining scenes make it flow.

Wow, your characters are really likeable and genuine. Good plot flow, too. Well done! 5 stars

You have don’t a great job getting me invested with this (non) couple. It would seem a shame to see that Sean & Lauren never get together ! That may happen in real life BUT hey this is Literotica so I can dream, right ? Looking forward to reading the next chapter !!

The swinging scene.. omg. So funny, so sad, so true, so well done.

Thoroughly enjoying this