All Comments on 'The Politician's Daughter Ch. 02'

by Carnal_Flower

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Strong sequel

Glad that you follow your well received chapter 1 with a strong sequel. Well done, hope you will keep this excellent series going. Thanks

tusaistuquoitusaistuquoiover 9 years ago
Very Good

I really enjoyed how this story came together. It showed the conflicted turmoil leading up to the culmination of Paul succumbing to his carnal urges. Well written and very stimulating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Man both parts are excellent, Please this great story

RightymintRightymintover 9 years ago
Well done!

Extremely well written! There's so much going on here; taboo at its finest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Strong build up

Tension and resolution...Perfect! This series has a lot of potential...LOVE -LOVE- LOVE that Allison dresses sexy !!!!

Oz99Oz99over 9 years ago
Fabulous Writing!!!

Carnal Flower your ability to write hot sex scenes is beyond compare! Your detail of both the emotional and physical aspects renders your writing among the best in erotic creativity! Well done my friend; well done! The sex scenes were simply exquisite and oh so fucking hot!!!!!! Oz

NewFeelingJHNewFeelingJHover 9 years ago
Great!

Extremely beautiful scenes, great dialogs, awesome story and great writing... This was wonderful...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lol...

You know you're an exquisite writer. Smart too. Very, very smart. Because only sweetness allows flight.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent Job

This is truly one of the most well written stories that I have read on this site. You have a real talent for writing! Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

After Part 1 I couldn't wait for part 2. I must say it was well worth the wait.

Everything worked and flowed so perfectly. Thank you, I look forward to more wonderful writing from you.

Babygirl_081Babygirl_081over 9 years ago
chapter 3?

Is there gonna be a chapter 3? Absolutely love this story!

RelentlessOnanismRelentlessOnanismover 8 years ago
A new favourite writer

I must admit, I've only recently seen your work - and I've become a big fan. You're obviously a filthy, depraved creature - and I mean that as a compliment. It's so heartening to see a great new writer. Some of the best authors on Literotica appear to have retired in recent years - so it's good to see some 'fresh blood' coming through.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wow

U a,great as a writer. Brilliantly written

Sc1890Sc1890about 8 years ago
So fuckin hot

Your such a hot writer. This two part story is so incredible and gets me gushing every time!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautiful story

My heart is so full after reading this! I hope you are working on a part 3. We need more Carnal!!

Dmjewels69Dmjewels69over 3 years ago

Still one of my all time favorites ❤ Love coming back and re-reading this every once in a while!

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 3 years ago

5 stars loved it. My first time with you and worth all the hours spent together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A sweet and captivating read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Carnal_Flower, you’re a wonderful writer, just wish Allison was a bit more vocal instead of being “at lost for words” so often. I see a pattern since most of the main female characters in your stories are all like that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE ABOUT THE FATHER AND DAUGHTER!! IT IS STUPID THAT YOU DONT HAVE HER WORKING FOR HIM THEN THEY CAN ALWAYSBE TOGETHER!! IS HE STILL FUCKING THE PRODUCER!!

ToughSailorToughSailorabout 2 months ago

Great, but wish the ending wasn't so abrupt. More please . . . .

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