All Comments on 'The Pond'

Very hot story.

.. i'll have to do me some trepassing if thats what you end up with. ; )

Very good.

I really liked it.

Ms. Kitten, I somehow feel I'm being prejudice when searching for the right words to express how much I enjoy your writings. Some of your stories are just so easy to read I find myself thinking it must be easy for you to write them. However, I know you put a lot of time and effort into them and I appreciate it. Well done. Thanks

There is something very erotic about a woman wet from swimming its even more erotic to flirt with a woman when swimming in close proximity to her.I suppose it must be linked in some way to our evolution.Well done Danielle,I have a feeling that there are great things to come for you.

One of the best

really god i love your work and this lil' number is really something that could make a great story (already is but i just wanna hint stuff) if you wanted to continu it (?)

Wow.. beautifully written.. I felt it...

this story is soooo hot, i want more

I don't give many fives but this one deserves it! Although the setting is somewhat contrived it didn't matter in the end. The comment 'nice dive' sold it to me. I like short surprise comments. I try to include a few in my ramblings.

Very hot, nice and short, hints at romance and more without having to go into long elaborate details. Very very VERY beautifully written.

I love Keith. Seems this story might be better categorized in Erotic Couplings, though.

BS, BS, BS

Skinny dipping would NOT be trumped by PHYSICAL ASSAULT.

couldn't complete it ... DKP

Great read

... I enjoyed. Believe me, I enjoyed.

Glad you decided to repost it.

Thank you.

I would bet, that not even one of 100 women would find that situation arousing. What an asshole… how old is this guy supposed to be? 13?

Wow, great short read! I thoroughly enjoyed the story and the unexpected outcome and change of emotions. I'd appreciate more shorts like this one.