All Comments on 'The Pool Ch. 03'

by Lovelylucie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Super hot. Can't wait to read more.

LovelylucieLovelyluciealmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your comment - much appreciated

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Shemurr

When is The Pool Ch. 04 gonna come out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
"Eh"

I really couldn't read past the part where the brother was rubbing lotion on her and they started saying 'eh!' a lot . It's really annoying to be honest and I feel the story would be better without it .

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