All Comments on 'The Predators Ch. 03'

Don’t bother about how long this story will be. I just can’t await part 4.

this will be hopefully awesome.

Can't help but look forward to what comes next. Personally I want Fay to get a bit of tough treatment. Maybe even a run in with the predators. So long as it doesn't end with her dying though :p

I actually kinda like her.

Loving the story, great characters and hot as hell. Can't wait to see how it goes. Things with Mason sound promising and I can't wait for her inevitable run in with the predators. One way or another I hope she gets pregnant before the end.

I like what you're doing with this story. Since you asked for suggestions, let me first give my own warning: my dark side does not need encouragement. I suggest the perps and their accomplices kidnap Vic, and Fay tries to rescue him, and in the process falls prey to their evil ways and becomes another victim in terms of sexual exploitation. Mason set her up, after having first enjoyed her charms once again, but never having forgiven her for breaking up with him. In the meantime her boyfriend gives up on her, not knowing the reason she's ghosted him is because she's being held captive and being forced to provide sexual favors to a select group of men that get off on raping cops. Making Fay their plaything was the original goal all along. Feel free to ignore all of this, I'm just brainstorming. Thank you, Miss Kitty, for the good story in progress! -- JB Edwards