All Comments on 'The Prince's Brother'

Someone has returned with a stellar performance. This whopper of a story is a great Halloween offering and even better a return of a great author. Welcome back. Five stars and good luck in the competition .

Its a wonderful Story! I thought i was Reading a book Most of the time:)

Great story, so well written, enjoyed it completely. Thank you.

Great writing!

Such a good read!!!!!! 5 stars. Thank you

I'm still grinning. Such a twist, and so well planned! I had no idea how they were going to get out of it, I didn't see it coming, and I loved it. It is a sexy story with great characters and complete in every way. I really enjoyed Estella, and was so taken with the play between the worlds. And, as always, I'm compelled by your undercurrent of dry wit. Holding his own head. You have such a mind, and I missed the writing that allowed me glimpses into it. Everyone did. Dozens of stars.

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Although Sabina despises Corbett, how are the princes and Sebastien better than him? Did they snatch her from her world and force her to remain enchanted, then sacrificed her? I thought Sabina had already crossed into the other world when she made the choice to flee from her home... Does that happen later? So why does she end up with demonic characters? Is it because she disobeyed her mother, or is it a trap? Or is she herself imbued with a demonic side?

It would have also been interesting to see Sabina arrive at her friend's place with a continuation involving Corbett, just as it had started, but without the princes.

I really enjoyed this story, a masterpiece by a great author, 5 Star. Thank you.

It is so GREAT to see you are writing and posting! This story was pure enjoyment for me. Truly well done, I hope your muse and time allow for more stories.

I did not see that coming! What a clever twist and fun characters. I adore how you describe their emotional states:

“...if he weren't so incensed, Sebastian would have been amused that for the first time, Sabina played a Queen's role to perfection” and “Sabina swallowed heavily and glanced down to smooth her skirt. The devastation was gone from face when she looked up again.”

Your writing is a wonder. Thanks for sharing your intelligence and imagination with us.

A very welcome treat ❤️

Oh, Bellie...So damned good! Amusing and romantic and so well written. Thanks for writing and continuing to post here.

This was a fun read. Great work!

The moment I saw you update your profile and posted a new story, I knew I'd be in for a treat and what an impressive journey it was! You never disappoint, Bellie ❤️

Well, it took me long enough to finish your story, being a slow reader and having a day job. "Luckily" I'm currently sick and wisely taking the day off. Well I must say a new, great story from Bellie is a true health tonic, so many thanks, my sweet. I shall avoid the underworld as I stay with the living yet another day. 5*, it goes without saying. Welcome back, Bellie, and thanks for the good tonic! ~~JB

What a awesome story. It's was sensual and organic.

This reminds me somewhat of the kingdom of the wicked series by Kerri Maniscalco.

You could make this a full on series and I would throw my money at you. Ugh. Amazing.

Wonderful story.

Initially the genre turned me off it and the Initially pages threatening a trope.

How wrong I was.

What a great Web of intrigues you wove holding me to the end.

Well done.

I want more. More to the story with Dante & the Under realm ruler. Especially Sabina's interaction w them. Totally forgot this is a erotica

You don’t know how much I love this story. You wrote it in a simple way yet captivating. I fell in love with all main characters here: Sabina’s witty and innocence, Corbett’s arrogance but not that irritating, Sebastian’s gentle traits (oh how I wish he was real), Estella’s cunning yet alluring, and Dante’s hot headed but manly to keep promises. Every character is so important playing their rokes here. And now I am wishing to see Dante and Seb’s father. He must be super fun and jovial.

Thank you. Thank you so much!

I love this story sooooo much. Spent my entire morning reading this, as good as those storybooks. Love it!!

Holy crap, this is amazing! Absolutely freaking amazing! And I'm only two pages in. Can't wait to finish the rest of this amazing story! Insta favourite, thank you very much.

Great short story. I do miss your writing.

Amazing story, thank you!! Please don't end it here and write more chapters!! :)

😍favorite

Gosh I love your fantasy writing. I’m so happy you gifted us with this work! I hope all is well in your world and we can look forward to more stories in the future. You are my favorite writer on literati’s by a mile!

Amazing! Please write more.

Cool story! I enjoyed!

This is really an excellent story! And great characters!

I didn't expect such a riveting plot! Really enjoyed it. Great story!

Wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Would make a great book!

I would definitely buy it as a physical book... Amazing!

This was an absolutely fantastic read. As good if not better than much on Kindle. The only addition I would make would be that Sabine be slightly more traumatized after the non-con voyeuristic interval. She sort of bounced back from that violation without a backwards glance.

luv your work, moar pls

Yo! This was AMAZING! Would love a continuation! Going to check out the rest of your stuff ASAP.

My favourite kind of non-con story!

This was the worst stories I have ever read. you need to work on grammar

So sexy<3

uhm fuck yes?? This book was enthralling from start to finish!!! Take all my stars

Ypucould turn this into a proper series for webtoon and make loads of money, it's very well written!

I would love for you to turn this into a series on those apps that's have weekly stories. People would literally throw money at you for more

This was incredible! I want it as a book and I can't wait to read more!!!!! I wish Sabina had gotten to learn more about Sebastian and get to know him better before falling in love with him though. Also, why was she so unaffected by Corbett's assault? But seriously. I need more of this story! I need to know what the under realm is like, and is maxim immortal? And how did Sebastian smooth things over with his family?... So much potential