All Comments on 'The Private Eye Ch. 01'

If a little sparse on details. It could be expanded with more conversation with various people as he tracks down the tape, and perhaps more information as he researches the Senator and her hubby.

And since it has been more than a year an a half since it was posted, it looks like the 'to be continued' isn't going to happen. Which is too bad, it's a good story and needs to be continued. I voted full marks, but since I didn't look I don't know how well it scored overall.

The one odd note was that she was Republican and it was the Dom candidate who was squeezing her with blackmail. In recent times, since the Nixon era anyway, it seems like it's the GOP people who do the dirty tricks. Although as I've maintained all along that 'they're all crooks on both sides," and I have to admit that in a different part of the country it could be the other way around.