All Comments on 'The Quarry Ch. 04'

A bit short. Also, didn't make sense b/c if the plan was to explain the time by saying they had a flat they had to fix, they'd have to puncture the tire and put the spare on which they didn't do. Anyhow, I guess I hope the story gets a bit more interesting than him being forced by guards and the boss and the governor to suck and screw them over and over. I'd like to see you make it more interesting like by telling us why he got such a long sentence and putting in some plot twists.

The story of the flat provides a bit of a problem plot wise in this chapter, but it's not a huge problem to the story itself (as far as I can see). I'd really like to get back to why Julez was sentenced to the 3 yrs to begin with...and to also find out what happened to Jeff. Did they "dispose" of the old with the appearance of the new?