All Comments on 'The Reluctant Exhibitionist Ch. 03'

This could be a great series. For my enjoyment have Wendy describe her feelings (emotions and body sensations) with a little more detail. I liked it a lot.

A good story on one way individual limits may be pushed beyond social traditions. Though I may not necessarily agree with the idea of 'forced exhibitionism' as fun or socially responsible, it seems to be written about quite often in fantasy literature. I think the characters in a story of this type should be able to discreetly enjoy the event without getting pushed over the edge and turning it in to something completely sexual. Being socially naked is unusual for many people because so many are conditioned to modesty and NOT seeking out such open living, and this make it "edgy" and mysterious unexplored territory. I hope you will continue writing the story and continue giving perspectives from each character. I enjoyed the ending of your story "Allison's Inheritance" and look forward to where you will take those characters.

Another fabulous entry. Keep em cummin!

I really enjoyed this one. I also felt pissed off at nancy for pausing the button. Although, i wish you had written about her experience in the super market and then ended it on how nancy paused the stop watch. But overall it was a great story.

Please write more.