by Bokimbol
Oh yeah that was incredible!!! What a seduction it was a classic straight girl getting a lesbian workover. Excellent writing.. Part two please.. Now!!
Wow! Wow! Wow! That story was amazing and so well written. Please can we have more of the same soon...... I can't wait.....
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is a really good story with a good twist in it you are a great writer keep it up
this had good potential but you are in desperate need of an editor and a woman input
this story is awesome.but the second part "the lesbians are not so reluctant" is not upto the mark as compared to this one.i request you to kindly write 3rd part also.............
As a casual and non-regular reader of adult literature,,I happened on your story and am awestruck with your style and story telling. I am a lusty and proud lesbian who has had the immense pleasure of having a lactating lover but never did I ever imagine the immense pleasures you wrote about here.
Write more and more and more and,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Thank you
Every word I read was just right. WOW! Made me excited!
TOTALLY AWESOME MAKES ONES MOUTH WATERY. OH WHAT A TASTY STORY...
๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น. ๐ง๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ช๐ฎ๐ฏ.... 5๐'s
Sucking a nipple so hard that something ruptures inside it and it suddenly swells to double its size? Without bleeding? A pussy that can suck milk out of a nipple? Boobs that can stretch forward on their own and insert themselves into somebody's mouth? An adult woman that drinks so much milk from just one pair of tits such that her belly is so full and bloated she looks pregnant - and one tit is still half full?
Weird but fun!
I thoroughly enjoyed that so much I came more than I think I've done in a long time, however, the spelling and grammar left me perplexed. Having to think what word or words I was supposed to be reading took the shine right of the story too many times. As the other reader above said, get yourself a good editor before you write anymore.
Pleeeeaaasssee.
This one wasnโt my favorite inโ the series. Seems rushed. Leading to grammar, spelling and editing .
Still I enjoyed it My my white sticky goo flew out.