All Comments on 'The Reluctant Papa'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I liked the way the story went very much ......

I liked the way the story went very much.! It made for a very sexy story but also a very funny story to make it different for the reader ! I enjoyed the story to the fullest and laughed my arse off 4 or 5 times through the story.!** "MORE"..!**** ("5" ) ATW

"""I need a set-up like the one in this story.! ) lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
sometimes...

the good guy wins...

ProfDavrosProfDavrosalmost 8 years ago
Fantastic balanced with realism.

Great fun story with a real "nude day" component.

I like that Daniel's moral code had to be satisfied repeatedly for the action to continue. Looking forward to others of your stories.

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyalmost 8 years agoAuthor
to ProfDavros

thanks for the message about the name mix-up. much appreciated.

CynfullyCynfullyalmost 8 years ago
3 or 4

If it werent for the well written erotic situations I would have given it a three. A bit long but fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
cute

cute , fun little story .

thanks for writing it .

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