All Comments on 'The Rendezvous Ch. 01'

A good way to begin a series. I will watch for more.

Him: „Yes babe, I‘m a sick brain-dead idiot and I need you to be fucked and impregnated by a black bastard. I then hope I get my 1 inch dick so hard that you are able to find him and cut him off...“, he whined and lost completely control about his bladder.

Thats the quality of this crap story...

This is a good story with attention to character development and flow. I definitely can't wait to see what happens next.

I need more, you know what a girl likes for sure xoxoxoox Annette

You get points for the fact that Mr Johnson is married and that Patricia's husband gets to play with Mrs Johnson; something that almost never happens in Literotica

You lose points for the fact that only Mrs Coleman (Patricia) has a first name

You also lose points because we don't know what happened between Mrs Johnson and Mr Coleman- it would have been a much more exciting story to hear a little about what they did.

based on the above I can't rate it higher than 2.7