All Comments on 'The Reunion Pt. 01'

and a 3some

Nice fantasy. Can not wait for next chapter. 5 Stars.

Loved it. A continuation would be good. Well written. Needs a little work on word usage though. Should be "cue" not "queue" & a couple of others that I found.

I thought for sure that Stacy would drop by for a taste

Does the phrase, “One of the only hotels in town,” sound dumb?

The only hotels in town are the only hotels in town. I can’t imagine an out of town hotel being in town, even in Caldwell.

You wonder if Stacey knows you’re eating Tess? She saw you crawl under the table. That’s pretty obvious.

I enjoyed your story and look forward to chapter two. Hopefully Stacy joins the two in the morning.

I can't believe the high ratings. The writing is juvenile. This seems to be written by a 17 year old C student. Come on everyone, have some standards.

The third paragraph refers to

"all three high schools in this small town"

I graduated from a senior high school (three grades) that had 900 students. It was the only high school in a city with a population of 17,000.

To me that is a large town.

From a quick perusal of the internet:

Town -- A town has a population of 1,000 to 20,000

Large town -- A large town has a population of 20,000 to 100,000.

How large would a city have to be to require 3 high schools??

Norman has 3 high schools, but it is the third largest city in Oklahoma, with 126,000 population.

Although I do not care for attending my own reunions (high school, college, grad school), I kinda like reading about them.

So, thanks, and on to Pt. 02.

Paul in Oklahoma