All Comments on 'The Right to Surrender Ch. 02'

by TheDarkCloud

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
thank you

amazing!!

surferchick88surferchick88almost 11 years ago
Woohoo

Oh wow, what a sequel. This Story Goes Even as basta and Mean as i Hoped it. Perfect continue of a great Start. Please give us more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Focus please

Boring, repetitive and could you decide what country this taking place in please ?

You are using both English and American idioms.

DiannahDiannahalmost 11 years ago
4 stars

Good story. Could stand a bit more detail, but it does flow nicely.

PaperdartPaperdartalmost 11 years ago
A good read

A great story. TheDarkCloud has written another chapter and continues with the kind of story he does well. It looks as if there will be more to come as the poor policewoman is mistreated and controlled by Norman and I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

billie babkabillie babkaalmost 11 years ago
Another great one!

You have once again made my juices flow like Niagra! What a wonderful story, and what a wonderful slut. i felt a part of this story, as if it was me experiencing her shame and humiliation, her pain...and her delight in it all. There were only a few places where i feel you missed a chance to show even more of her depravity, and how easily such a slut can slip even further into the gutter. Such as: at the tattoo parlor, after she has decided to pay the tattoo artist in cash rather than "services", i feel that she would almost certainly have become aroused as he worked on her, so aroused that she would end by begging him to fuck her, which he does, but still charges her....mmmmmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wonderful

Classic thedarkcloud humiliation. So happy to see you back. I was worried. Hopefully there will be many more in the future.

iceblockiceblockalmost 11 years ago
Great Sequel

Thanks DC. Great sequel, lived up to everything we've come to expect from You.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
When are you going to finish beyonce in bondage.

Please finish it soon. Its the best series on this sight

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just what I was looking for...

Awesome story! The setup and premise are definitely one of my favorite fantasies! I especially love how the main character is a willing and active participation in her own humiliation/downfall! Please keep the chapters coming!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
new chapter

Its great probably one of the best on here just needs more regular updates. When can we expect the next installment? Would one a week be too much to ask. . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing

I love this series. I really hope you add more. Normaly I prefer to see the girl end up back in her normal life left with some messed up memories but this is so good. Would love to see more thanks for you've given us so far.

bdsmshadebdsmshadeabout 10 years ago

Such an amazing story hope its going to keep going. Just the thought of pushing the limits of the game only to find yourself no longer with any way to escape totally out of control. Omg thats just so hot driving me wild and aching to push my own limits and see where I end up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Very good story

Shame you seem to have abandoned this. It's one of my favorite stories of all times

KumSlutKimKumSlutKimover 9 years ago
Please continue!

This is REALLY hot. The ending is especially memorable and well written! I loved how he treated her and I especially love how she licked his cum off the ground. It was interesting when it was rapey at first but now that she really likes it, I can't stop wondering about how much lower she can sink next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please Finnish this story it is excellent

on e of my favorites

YourcumkittenYourcumkittenover 9 years ago
gasping

i am running almost out of breath to the next chapter!

huggggggs

suzanne

Wendylooking4BbcWendylooking4Bbcalmost 8 years ago
I want this

I need a Bull to give me direction in my life

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Well written Amazing Story

Excellent Story love the character development, please continue.

TencemTencemover 1 year ago

Wow. What powerful deranged erotic story telling. You've ruined my day 🤣 lucky for me I have these few days off

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenover 1 year ago

To have a strong but perverted man take control and use me as his toy is what I crave❤️❤️

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