by TheDarkCloud
Oh wow, what a sequel. This Story Goes Even as basta and Mean as i Hoped it. Perfect continue of a great Start. Please give us more!!
Boring, repetitive and could you decide what country this taking place in please ?
You are using both English and American idioms.
Good story. Could stand a bit more detail, but it does flow nicely.
A great story. TheDarkCloud has written another chapter and continues with the kind of story he does well. It looks as if there will be more to come as the poor policewoman is mistreated and controlled by Norman and I look forward to seeing what will happen next.
You have once again made my juices flow like Niagra! What a wonderful story, and what a wonderful slut. i felt a part of this story, as if it was me experiencing her shame and humiliation, her pain...and her delight in it all. There were only a few places where i feel you missed a chance to show even more of her depravity, and how easily such a slut can slip even further into the gutter. Such as: at the tattoo parlor, after she has decided to pay the tattoo artist in cash rather than "services", i feel that she would almost certainly have become aroused as he worked on her, so aroused that she would end by begging him to fuck her, which he does, but still charges her....mmmmmmmm
Classic thedarkcloud humiliation. So happy to see you back. I was worried. Hopefully there will be many more in the future.
Thanks DC. Great sequel, lived up to everything we've come to expect from You.
Please finish it soon. Its the best series on this sight
Awesome story! The setup and premise are definitely one of my favorite fantasies! I especially love how the main character is a willing and active participation in her own humiliation/downfall! Please keep the chapters coming!!!
Its great probably one of the best on here just needs more regular updates. When can we expect the next installment? Would one a week be too much to ask. . .
I love this series. I really hope you add more. Normaly I prefer to see the girl end up back in her normal life left with some messed up memories but this is so good. Would love to see more thanks for you've given us so far.
Such an amazing story hope its going to keep going. Just the thought of pushing the limits of the game only to find yourself no longer with any way to escape totally out of control. Omg thats just so hot driving me wild and aching to push my own limits and see where I end up
Shame you seem to have abandoned this. It's one of my favorite stories of all times
This is REALLY hot. The ending is especially memorable and well written! I loved how he treated her and I especially love how she licked his cum off the ground. It was interesting when it was rapey at first but now that she really likes it, I can't stop wondering about how much lower she can sink next!
i am running almost out of breath to the next chapter!
huggggggs
suzanne
Excellent Story love the character development, please continue.
Wow. What powerful deranged erotic story telling. You've ruined my day 🤣 lucky for me I have these few days off
To have a strong but perverted man take control and use me as his toy is what I crave❤️❤️