by bamadude55
This is one interesting story. I'm hoping to see what's next soon. The possibilities are endless. I'll be reading as long as you keep writing.
So far, Outstanding. Be descriptive of the muscled and hot bodies, and let us see where your sexual imagination goes. Go wild, and Bi!!!!!!
By no means is fiction necessarily "unbelievable". Perhaps that would better define "fantasy".
Like the way the Story Starts.
it would be awsome to stumble onto The Ring!
If this is what he did w/ the ring, I wonder what Bilbo Baggins did w/ it.
I think the only thing I really have a problem with in this series is a desire for the chapter to be longer, and the fact that driving from Florida is New Orleans is about a 12 hr drive.
I like where this is going... lets see more... I'm hoping some of the adventures are more humorous, Hornica sounds quick puckish