All Comments on 'The Ring Ch. 01'

I like the idea. I would encourage you to get someone to read it over to correct some of grammatical and usage errors. Looking forward to see what develops

Hope to read more of the Adventures of the Ring. and Keith He should have made sure that he put the No Pregnancy on .

An average guy and actually concerned with morals and ethics. A refreshing change.

Just a couple things. I would definitely have done the gypsy again, first to test the ring, and second because she might have thrown something else into the bargain when he did. And maybe used penis enlargement when he did his boss?

You're going to fuck your self silly. Oh that's right, the ring will fill your balls up. Go for it.

So sue me, I have a sick mind and really liked it! Lol!