by Just Plain Bob
Held my interest all the way. Very good writing. One or two slips with the spell checker but nothing to lessen the excitement of reading your work. Thanks
First thing — your notion that a church in which 'sinning' is required to prove God's grace is not a new one; it was one of the first of many beliefs that the early church declared a heresy. So much for the history lesson.<p><br>
Regarding the wife: she's a damn smart wife, who understands that the fantasy is fine, but the reality is dangerous. I found her to be an admirable woman. Not taking a chance with STDs, nor that she will fall in love with some lover, other than her husband, etc., but willing to find a way to tickle her husband's desire anyway!
Humorous,interesting,sexy and a good ending with a little twist. Well done. Thanks
Were it possible, I'd give an 85%. Hopefully, Candy won't do the reality instead of the fantasy. Reality is almost never as good as the fantasy, and there can be nasty consequences if the fantasy persists. She's a smart wife who knows how to keep her man.
....the dialogue at the beginning is excellent,very realistic-pistolpackinpete
An easily readable twist on the more typical theme of a cuckold/husband wanting to watch his wife have sex with another man.
Candy is one sweet lady. I loved the ordained minister gigs!
And he is a dumb shit for wanting to be a willing cuckold. I did give this story a good rating although i hate willing cuckolds. It was not his fault he was not one.
Hubby won't be watching but he's planted the seed and Candy will be cheating and making him a cuckold soon. Really, really dumb one Bob.
Rev is a lucky man. Wouldn't it be great if all women were like Candy? Hopefully she will continue to take care of her foolish husband.
Thanks for a great story Bob!
This is an all too common JPB defective male character. What kept me reading was that it was actually creative, and Candy was a more interesting character than the husband (except at the beginning, after which the husband degenerated into a cum slurping cuck wannabe).
She sounds like a keeper! You should be happy with what you have, she really loves you and trying to give you what you want within her boundaries. Looks like you both are enjoying it! You’ll be sorry if it actually happens and you lose her to the sex she gets addicted too! Been there you’ll lose unless you really don’t care about her! Good luck!
And the story is better because it is not her kink , either. Like that twist.
"Best of JPB" story.
And may the tax man be dammed! Creativity deserves a reward!