All Comments on 'The Road to Watching'

by Just Plain Bob

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katibkatibover 14 years ago
Captivating

Held my interest all the way. Very good writing. One or two slips with the spell checker but nothing to lessen the excitement of reading your work. Thanks

PostScriptorPostScriptorover 14 years ago
A couple of things...

First thing — your notion that a church in which 'sinning' is required to prove God's grace is not a new one; it was one of the first of many beliefs that the early church declared a heresy. So much for the history lesson.<p><br>

Regarding the wife: she's a damn smart wife, who understands that the fantasy is fine, but the reality is dangerous. I found her to be an admirable woman. Not taking a chance with STDs, nor that she will fall in love with some lover, other than her husband, etc., but willing to find a way to tickle her husband's desire anyway!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A great story

Humorous,interesting,sexy and a good ending with a little twist. Well done. Thanks

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 14 years ago
Liked it

Were it possible, I'd give an 85%. Hopefully, Candy won't do the reality instead of the fantasy. Reality is almost never as good as the fantasy, and there can be nasty consequences if the fantasy persists. She's a smart wife who knows how to keep her man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting read and....

....the dialogue at the beginning is excellent,very realistic-pistolpackinpete

Orion623Orion623over 14 years ago
Very Nicely Written

An easily readable twist on the more typical theme of a cuckold/husband wanting to watch his wife have sex with another man.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Much too long with the same old garbage

so I quit reading and gave it a 2

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
True Loving Wife

Candy is one sweet lady. I loved the ordained minister gigs!

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
Really good story and a very smart and loyal wife.

And he is a dumb shit for wanting to be a willing cuckold. I did give this story a good rating although i hate willing cuckolds. It was not his fault he was not one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Of course she'll do another man

Hubby won't be watching but he's planted the seed and Candy will be cheating and making him a cuckold soon. Really, really dumb one Bob.

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 8 years ago
Great Story

Rev is a lucky man. Wouldn't it be great if all women were like Candy? Hopefully she will continue to take care of her foolish husband.

Thanks for a great story Bob!

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
No

After a string of good JPB stories, I was overdue to find this stinker.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Give the devil his due

This is an all too common JPB defective male character. What kept me reading was that it was actually creative, and Candy was a more interesting character than the husband (except at the beginning, after which the husband degenerated into a cum slurping cuck wannabe).

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thankful!

She sounds like a keeper! You should be happy with what you have, she really loves you and trying to give you what you want within her boundaries. Looks like you both are enjoying it! You’ll be sorry if it actually happens and you lose her to the sex she gets addicted too! Been there you’ll lose unless you really don’t care about her! Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
His kink is not my kink

And the story is better because it is not her kink , either. Like that twist.

ReadyOneReadyOne8 months ago

"Best of JPB" story.

And may the tax man be dammed! Creativity deserves a reward!

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...

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