All Comments on 'The Room Ch. 01'

Very well written story.

My pet hate is arrogant arseholes so I guess he gets to control her ....shame

God this is one hot story! I would love to hear his take on the run up to this moment, I hope there is more to it than just this one afternoon. Thank you.

Delicious!

Thank you for your comments! I'm working on part 2 now which does involve more from his perspective.

I'd like to know more about her.

I loved this story. Well written and very, very hot. I hope you are busy on the next instalment.

It's June now, of 2015. Where is the next part?

Good premise.

But all those 'orders'...

Too fast.

Too automatic.

Three stars.