All Comments on 'The Roommates Ch. 01'

Dont bother with chapter 2.

Don't listen to the troll. I thought it had a great set-up and very visual descriptions. Part 2 would be very warranted.

can't wait for next chapter.

Cant wait for next part

I agree, it was fantastic. Don't listen to Mr Crap. More, we need it soon too.

Very nice story. There should be a few chapters in the future :)

I expect to hear more of this story. New chapters soon please.

Ignore the Troll, amazing, can't wait for Chapter 2. (and hopefully more)

can't wait for the next one, you left my cock straining for release

Loved your story,Fantastic details can't wait for next chapter.

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Very intense story can't wait for the next part

Bring on Ch2! Cant wait to see it!

This is amazing writing! I love it. I'm soooo very eager for chapter 2,3,4... and MORE! Thank you for this very riveting and compelling piece. It really draws you in!

This was Great => cant wait for more chapters.

great that you're not rushing things, but can't wait for more. :)

Love the start of this, can't wait for more! I agree with guy30, I like how you're not rushing the story. Hope to read another chapter soon!

Is with my editor. It's written, but I haven't heard a peep from EndOfStory for a while so they may be busy. Please bear with me, have patience.

Hopefully I've gone slow enough for you fans of the slow simmer, but maybe not.

Great story. Waiting and winning!

Really enjoyed this part, any word from your editor?

I hope you have time to write another part! very hot!!

when are we gonna get a sequel, one is needed :)

Loved it, can't wait for round 2