by PetRopeBunny
Love Love Love
Love the loving, gentle relationships between the two of them
Love the writing, the pacing, the general craftmanship
Love the fact that this is the first chapter
Really great story. You have got to keep this going please. Didn't notice any errors either. Nicely paced. My only complaint is that it ended. Lol.
Well written, gentle introduction of the two characters, already anxious to see what development you will slowly bring. You have touched something that makes waiting for chapter 2 an odd kind of frustration. Thank you.