All Comments on 'The Running Partner'

Ha! Loved this whole story

Excellent

Very intense

Applause!!!! Slow build but well worth the wait.

Well done.

Over 3 years since you published a story. I should think you'd have more to offer than this. Maybe stay with sci-fi next time.

Goddamn that was hot! Loved the character building and dialogue.

So very believable and highly erotic. Loved it. I sure hope you will make this story chapter 1 of many. There are many loose ends, each of which is a story on its own. Thank you.

Well done. Five stars.

Really enjoyed this .... nice story well told

Wow! What a wonderful story, and a story that already is becoming a romantic love story. The characters and context is totally believable and the dialogue is spot on. There are plenty of challenges facing Lizzie and Adam, and a lot of history to deal with. I expect that their relationship will evolve into something much more. The 50-year old beauty and the ex-boyfriend of her daughter Ellie are working into a relationship that could last the rest of their lives. Please continue this story.

5*

A nice start to a story. It is unfinished so I won't rate it. I'm a bit troubled bout the age thing. If she was 18 having his exgirlfriend them being the same age. How could she be 50?? Logically she would be 42-43 ;-)

Very enjoyable read. I liked how the relationship developed. The humor and teasing each other was spot on. A couple of word baubles but not enough to detract from the story. A rare 5 stars from me!

A nice, slow build-up, believable characters and dialogue and great sex at the end. Five stars from me!

Thanks again everyone!

@LudvigBlomSE Ellie is 28 but she has an older sister who is 31 :)

Great slow burn. Very tastefully done. This begs for more.

Great story. So glad you're back!

Trusting we will be reading more of their adventures.

Great story!! More, please.

Very good 👍

He have to tell her he was in love with her .???

A ripper yarn

Nicely done.

Absolutely smashing!!

Good, nice build up, believable characters, good sex and a great ending. Would hope for a sequel?

This was really good. Great in fact. Like everyone else, I hope there'll be a part 2. I enjoyed the story immensely; the character development, the dialogue, the growing anticipation of when and how they'd get it on, and when it happened, the sex didn't disappoint. I'm currently laid up following ankle surgery, so look forward to reading some of your other stories. Thanks for the very enjoyable read.

now imagine if she was fertile as well..