All Comments on 'The Rustic Cabin'

You are one hell of a writer. Your character development was terrific and the flow of the story was right on the money. Your writings are far ahead of many others on the page who only seem to want to write about fucking, sucking and handjobs. You had all of that and more but you differed by having some actual feelings showing through.

Keep it up.

now you need the anal side to be opened up

Didn't have the usual environmental flaws, Background was warm and comfortable, Plot was perfectly executed, This story easily allowed me to paint mental picture of each event that flowed better than most movies... Not to mention that it was damned HOT!!!!!!!!!!! My compliments to a job very well done on this story.

having a ready supply of condoms and lube before he even intended to have sex with his daughter is odd. If one has been married a while (in this case about 20 years), why would he need condoms for sex with his wife? Of course, for the purposes of the story, the condoms came in damn handy.

In answer to the question of why the dad would have a ready supply of condoms and lube the answer is really quite easy.

He had planned to use the condoms and lube on his wife. She was still of child bearing age and they didn't want any more kids. The lube was used for the rare times she allowed anal penetration and like a good Boy Scout he always wanted to be prepared.

Jan

Have a whole box of condoms. Sorry, that was the only down fall of this great story.

So, now on to part two.

You write what I want to experience with a younger Woman. Thanks!

just a question whats a married fathers need for condoms? as why did he have some on hand other wise a wonderful story