All Comments on 'The Seagull'

wtf did i just read?

Maybe the author doesn't understand the meaning?

I feel like I just dropped some acid

I’m confused...

this doesn't even deserve a -1... the most confusing story I have even read.

The incest is in the boy’s lust for his mother & his father taking him in the shower. This is a very surreal read and it is very confusing what is the reality and what is in the mind. If this is in the mind, as in a dream, it leads a lot of questions about the narrator. If part of this is in reality, is this a psychotic break of some sort.

This read isn’t a piece of crap like the rating suggests, it is very odd though, not super incest-y erotic. Very odd short story. Disturbing, but interesting.

Ignore all the negative feedback.This was artfully written and, if I had to guess, a description of your character's dreams as he slept at a nude beach.

I hope you keep writing.

Athenais

This was beyond stupid. I guess the writer is coming down after a horrible acid trip or a very bad hangover. Please do not write anymore!

I agree with two of the commenters above who say this isn't supposed to be taken literally. It could be one of several things: a dream, a fantasy, a hallucination. There may be a mind-altering substance involved.

For lack of another term I'd call it surrealism. There is a place on this site for that.

I like it lol for the stupid people the sea gull shits while hes a sleep making him have thoughts about being spunked on,....... read again lol

They are missing your genius.